Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Thursday, September 17, 2015

Extra Reading Diary: Brothers Grimm (Ashliman) Unit

For Week 4, I chose to read another Grimm Brothers unit, specifically the Grimm Ashliman unit.  The half of the unit that I read was very entertaining, but not particularly useful for my potential storybook project.  Most of the stories were tales of animals and animal villains.  There were a few stories that I could potentially twist for my purposes, but I’m not sure right now.  I’ll definitely have to think about it. 

I found it interesting that the stories of Little Red Cap and The Wolf and the Seven Young Kids were so similar.  Of course the wolf was the villain who devoured people or an animal’s children, but they were taken care of in the exact same way.  When someone discovered what the wolf had done, they cut the wolf open to discover that the people were alive and well, then they filled the wolf’s belly with stones.  I thought that was rather different: the same story told with slightly different characters.

Yawning Wolf. Source: Wikimedia

The Singing Bone was a fantastic story in my opinion.  I would like to try to come up with some way to work it into my storybook, although it would definitely take some work.  I liked that one brother was killed by his envious brother and that his bones sang the tale of his death.  It was definitely unique for me.


I also like the story of Rumpelstiltskin.  It would be a lot of fun to work this one into my storybook.  I’m not sure how I would do it exactly, but it is a good fit for my idea for My Brothers Grimm.  I might use it as my first story so that I have an easy story to work out the kinks with, then work in the tales that would require a little more creativity. 

Monday, September 14, 2015

Week 4 Storytelling: A Tale of Two Brothers

The CEO was named John Hedj.  He was the leader of a multibillion dollar technology firm that specialized in keeping a variety of people’s money secure.  He had a state of the art building in New York City, enclosed in glass and full of steel and humming computers.  The facility was the most secure building in the world. 

The money of the richest clients was actually secured on a computer in Hedj’s office on the top floor.  The money codes could be downloaded to any bank computer in the world for instant access.  This included the riches of Hedj himself.  However, two of the programmers, brothers in fact, contrived a backdoor into the program.

A few years later, the brothers’ mother was dying of cancer and they did not have the money to pay for the hospital bills.  They went to a wireless cafĂ© in NYC and hacked back into the computer system, transfer a small amount of money into a secure bank account.  When they had their money, they ensured that they had left no trace of their presence.

Hedj was furious when he discovered some of his money was missing.  Again and again, the hackers returned and stole more and more of his money.  Finally, Hedj decided to hire a new programmer to create a Trojan horse in the system that would attack any foreign entities. 

A few weeks later, the brothers returned, needing yet more money for their mother’s hospital bills.  As they had planned, one brother hacked in to secure the system and the other held back to steal the money.  As the first brother hacked into the program, the Trojan horse struck.  It locked up his computer and activated his webcam, sending the image and information to Hedj’s security firm.  He knew it was too late for him and that he would spend his life in jail, but he was able to save his brother from the same fate. 

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Years later, the brother was finally put on trial for his crimes.  He would surely receive life in prison for all that he had done, especially since he had stolen money from such powerful people. 

Meanwhile, his recently recovered mother grieved in secret.  She knew that her son had only stolen the money to pay for her hospital bills, and she knew her other son could free him with the use of his skills. 

The free brother set up a system of computers that would constantly jumble the IP addresses, throwing off any people trying to trace him.  He then hacked into the computers of the attorneys and Hedj’s company, erasing all copies of the evidence against his brother.  In the modern world, he knew that there were no hard copies of the data and that this would cancel the trial and free his brother.

Hedj was furious that the hacker had escaped.  He knew then that he must have had help to hack into his company.  He hired a female hacker, the best in the world.  He told her to send out feelers for a pair of hackers who had accumulated vast sums of money. 

She talked to many people in the hacker community and at length she found them.  The hackers knew someone was looking for them and they set up a meet with the woman.  The brother who had remained free was the one to approach her.  She said that she would help him hack into the company again if he told her how he had done it in the first place.

He told her, but when she tried to seize him and take him to Hedj, he got away.  Any attempts to track the brother were thwarted.  When the woman returned to Hedj and told him how the hacker had erased all traces of himself online, the CEO was impressed.  He sent out a proclamation online, offering a pardon and a reward if he turned himself in.

The hacker went readily, certain that there was no evidence of his activities. Hedj was so amazed by the hacker’s abilities that he gave him a job within his company.  There is no one more creative than a hacker, but this man had no equal in the world.

Computer Hacker. Source: Wikipedia

Author’s Note: 
I chose The Tale of King Rhampsinitus for my story this week. In the original story, a King built a chamber to house his treasures but one of the builders left a removable stone in the wall.  The sons of the builder later broke in, until one brother was caught in a trap.  The remaining brother cut of his head to protect his identity and later impressed the King so much that he was pardoned. 

For my rewrite, I decided to place the story in modern day.  I took the idea of digital money from the movie The Losers.  In my version, the brothers are hackers who steal money from a CEO whose security program they wrote.  The word Hedj is actually the ancient Egyptian word for silver or money.  I thought it was appropriate for the setup of the story.  


“The Tale of King Rhampsinitus” from Egyptian Myth and Legend by Donald Mackenzie (1907). Web Source: Mythology and Folklore UN-Textbook

Sunday, September 13, 2015

Reading Diary B: Ancient Egypt

The second half of the Ancient Egypt unit was more interesting for me.  I liked the longer stories and how they flowed more easily.  I enjoyed each of the stories for different reasons. 

The Two Brothers was intriguing.  I enjoyed the set up and the fact that Bata never truly died.  Every time a wrong was done to him he was reborn.  Every time his wife caused his death, he was given a new body to spite her. 

With The Book of Thoth, I liked the parallelism of the story, using the same words to describe the death of Merab and Ahura.  However, personally I find it kind of annoying to reread the same words again, but I do understand the use of the parallelism.  It added to the drama of the story.


I find it interesting how the villains or mischievous people in Egyptian myths are not always punished.  Some of the misdeeds are ignored, and some are actually rewarded for their ingenuity, as in The Tale of King Rhampsinitus.  I think that this would be interesting to use in my own Storybook about the Grimm Brothers’ sister.  She could use her intellect to outsmart some of the villains, and in return they allow her brothers to escape.  

Egyptian Temple. Source: Wikipedia

Reading Diary A: Ancient Egypt

I have always had a fascination with Egyptian myth.  I never really delved into it like I have done with Greek mythology, but it’s always drawn me.  Growing up, I played a computer game that was centered on the Egyptian gods and goddesses, which might contribute to my captivation.

This is why I chose to read the unit on Ancient Egyptian Myths and Stories.  It seemed incredibly interesting and was something that I have always wanted to learn more about.  Unfortunately, I did not find anything that really grabbed my attention for my own stories.  I loved the stories and the myths, but the style and most of the characters for this half unit did not fit with my storytelling style. 

However, the Secret Name of Ra did have a slight draw.  I like how though she coveted and connived to get his power, Isis did not kill Ra nor were there any repercussions for her actions. 

I find it interesting that the gods lived in the world of man and that they aged.  Ra began as a king on earth before ascending to the heavens.  I also find it intriguing that the Egyptian gods can die.  Osiris died at the hands of Set and Ra could have died at the hands of mankind.

Tutankhamun Falcon. Source: Wikimedia Commons